作者Kayla (Kayla)
看板Translation
標題[英中] 想問大家這句翻譯哪裡有問題
時間Sat Jun 20 18:11:36 2015
以下是論文摘要的其中一句
前幾天我的英文摘要被口試委員說翻的怪怪的 請我再修改
而我實在也搞不懂哪裡有問題
因此想請問大家看看 究竟是哪裡出了問題 謝謝!
中文原文：
人是組織的核心，因此掌握優秀員工是強化企業競爭力的重要關鍵。
英文翻譯：
As organizational members form the core of an organization,
having outstanding employees is the key to enhancing a company’s
competitiveness.
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1F：推 EVASUKA: 我覺得問題是冗贅。可能可改為As the core of an organiz 06/20 18:50
2F：→ EVASUKA: ation lies in its members, outstanding employees are 06/20 18:51
3F：→ EVASUKA: key to a company’s competitiveness. 06/20 18:51
4F：推 S8972616F: Human resource is the core of an organisation, and 06/21 20:50
5F：→ S8972616F: having an exceptional workforce is the key to... 06/21 20:51
6F：→ S8972616F: OR therefore the key to enhancing the business' 06/21 20:52
7F：→ S8972616F: competitiveness is to secure an exceptional workfor 06/21 20:52
8F：→ EVASUKA: 樓上workforce用得好！ 06/22 09:55
9F：→ Kayla: 謝謝解惑 06/22 22:48