作者Kayla (Kayla)
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标题[英中] 想问大家这句翻译哪里有问题
时间Sat Jun 20 18:11:36 2015
以下是论文摘要的其中一句
前几天我的英文摘要被口试委员说翻的怪怪的 请我再修改
而我实在也搞不懂哪里有问题
因此想请问大家看看 究竟是哪里出了问题 谢谢!
中文原文：
人是组织的核心，因此掌握优秀员工是强化企业竞争力的重要关键。
英文翻译：
As organizational members form the core of an organization,
having outstanding employees is the key to enhancing a company’s
competitiveness.
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1F：推 EVASUKA: 我觉得问题是冗赘。可能可改为As the core of an organiz 06/20 18:50
2F：→ EVASUKA: ation lies in its members, outstanding employees are 06/20 18:51
3F：→ EVASUKA: key to a company’s competitiveness. 06/20 18:51
4F：推 S8972616F: Human resource is the core of an organisation, and 06/21 20:50
5F：→ S8972616F: having an exceptional workforce is the key to... 06/21 20:51
6F：→ S8972616F: OR therefore the key to enhancing the business' 06/21 20:52
7F：→ S8972616F: competitiveness is to secure an exceptional workfor 06/21 20:52
8F：→ EVASUKA: 楼上workforce用得好！ 06/22 09:55
9F：→ Kayla: 谢谢解惑 06/22 22:48