※ 引述《JinSha (http://0rz.tw/h1hXC)》之銘言： 原PO英文不錯，我也該以translator板高手如雲的標準來評論這篇，而不是以平常 Eng-class版的標準 ( ￣ c￣)y▂ξ : QE規模下半年起縮減　亞股全數倒地 : The size of QE will shrink in the second half, causing a slump of ^^^^ scale of what in : Asian stock markets 下半年時常簡稱為 2Hxx，如2013年下半年 = 2H13 就算不簡稱也一定會說 second half _of the year_ : 美國聯準會發布會後聲明，本來市場期待聯準會主席柏南克會對QE退場表達比較符合市場 : 的談話，沒想到他更明確立QE退場的時間表，下半年會減緩買債的規模。這個消息一釋出 : ，不僅美國股債齊跌，亞洲市場更是全盤皆沒，台股也因此下跌近百點，市場反應相當劇 : 烈。不過，QE的退場定調，也在暗示美國經濟逐漸回升，市場不全然悲觀看待這個消息， : 也有法人認為這也可能是利空出盡後的加速趕底，接下來換基本面行情接手。 : The U.S. Federal Reserve issued an after-conference statement. Initially, the ^^^^^^^^^^ 美國聯準會有 committee 跟 board，沒有 conference (除非是 press conference) 這次應該是 committee (FOMC) : market expected that Federal Reserve Chairman Ben Bernanke would give a more : market-friendly talk on the end of QE; however, he set a more explicit : timetable for QE's end and would reduce the scale of debt purchase in the ^^^^ 有點怪 purchases : second half. After the release of this news, not only both the stocks and ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^ did [沒有the] : bonds slid in the U.S., stocks also fell in all Asian markets, leading to slide ^^^^^^^ 從這個leading開始，你的寫法會讓人認為TAIEX drop的原因是 stocks also fell in all Asian markets，然後 drastic response from market 也是 後果之一。換句話說，你的邏輯是： release of this news > US　stocks + bonds slide > stock fell in asian markets > TAIEX falls > drastic resp. from mkt. 但實際邏輯應該是： release of this news > US stocks + bonds slide > stocks fell in asian markets 包括 TAIEX falls 總結：drastic resp. from mkt. : a drop of about a hundred points in TAIEX and a drastic response from the : market. But the finalization of QE's exit also suggests the gradually rise ^^^^ QE 變成人了 XD (不算錯，只是不嚴謹) gradual : of the U.S. economy, and the market does not view this piece of news with full : pessimism. Some corporations also think that it signifies the accelerating 原文的「不全然悲觀」跟你的 not... full pessimism 感覺不一樣 ^^^^^^^^^^^^「法人」在台灣投資界一般譯為 II (II = institutional investors) ^^這個 it 是市場表現，跟上一句 的「市場看法」不一樣，不可以用 it 混過去。 : fall after all unfavorable information has been revealed, and quotations based : on market fundamentals will take over. 這一段翻得有點怪 : 問題:1.「本來市場期待..」這句用過去式有錯嗎，還是要用現在式呢？ 你那樣寫 ok : 2. 「加速趕底」和「利空出盡」怎麼翻? 現在還不會翻，暫時先翻這樣 「加速趕底」= accelerating to the bottom 注意「趕底」跟「往下」不一樣 「利空出盡」有很多翻法，這裡我可能會 reflect all downsides (反應所有下跌風險) : 3. 「換基本面行情接手」也不太會翻 這也有很多翻法，例如 revert back to the fundamentals 先醬~ 原PO如想討論我相信這裡的眾高手都很nice的 XD -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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