※ 引述《JinSha (http://0rz.tw/h1hXC)》之铭言： 原PO英文不错，我也该以translator板高手如云的标准来评论这篇，而不是以平常 Eng-class版的标准 ( ￣ c￣)y▂ξ : QE规模下半年起缩减　亚股全数倒地 : The size of QE will shrink in the second half, causing a slump of ^^^^ scale of what in : Asian stock markets 下半年时常简称为 2Hxx，如2013年下半年 = 2H13 就算不简称也一定会说 second half _of the year_ : 美国联准会发布会後声明，本来市场期待联准会主席柏南克会对QE退场表达比较符合市场 : 的谈话，没想到他更明确立QE退场的时间表，下半年会减缓买债的规模。这个消息一释出 : ，不仅美国股债齐跌，亚洲市场更是全盘皆没，台股也因此下跌近百点，市场反应相当剧 : 烈。不过，QE的退场定调，也在暗示美国经济逐渐回升，市场不全然悲观看待这个消息， : 也有法人认为这也可能是利空出尽後的加速赶底，接下来换基本面行情接手。 : The U.S. Federal Reserve issued an after-conference statement. Initially, the ^^^^^^^^^^ 美国联准会有 committee 跟 board，没有 conference (除非是 press conference) 这次应该是 committee (FOMC) : market expected that Federal Reserve Chairman Ben Bernanke would give a more : market-friendly talk on the end of QE; however, he set a more explicit : timetable for QE's end and would reduce the scale of debt purchase in the ^^^^ 有点怪 purchases : second half. After the release of this news, not only both the stocks and ^^^^^^^^^^^ ^ did [没有the] : bonds slid in the U.S., stocks also fell in all Asian markets, leading to slide ^^^^^^^ 从这个leading开始，你的写法会让人认为TAIEX drop的原因是 stocks also fell in all Asian markets，然後 drastic response from market 也是 後果之一。换句话说，你的逻辑是： release of this news > US　stocks + bonds slide > stock fell in asian markets > TAIEX falls > drastic resp. from mkt. 但实际逻辑应该是： release of this news > US stocks + bonds slide > stocks fell in asian markets 包括 TAIEX falls 总结：drastic resp. from mkt. : a drop of about a hundred points in TAIEX and a drastic response from the : market. But the finalization of QE's exit also suggests the gradually rise ^^^^ QE 变成人了 XD (不算错，只是不严谨) gradual : of the U.S. economy, and the market does not view this piece of news with full : pessimism. Some corporations also think that it signifies the accelerating 原文的「不全然悲观」跟你的 not... full pessimism 感觉不一样 ^^^^^^^^^^^^「法人」在台湾投资界一般译为 II (II = institutional investors) ^^这个 it 是市场表现，跟上一句 的「市场看法」不一样，不可以用 it 混过去。 : fall after all unfavorable information has been revealed, and quotations based : on market fundamentals will take over. 这一段翻得有点怪 : 问题:1.「本来市场期待..」这句用过去式有错吗，还是要用现在式呢？ 你那样写 ok : 2. 「加速赶底」和「利空出尽」怎麽翻? 现在还不会翻，暂时先翻这样 「加速赶底」= accelerating to the bottom 注意「赶底」跟「往下」不一样 「利空出尽」有很多翻法，这里我可能会 reflect all downsides (反应所有下跌风险) : 3. 「换基本面行情接手」也不太会翻 这也有很多翻法，例如 revert back to the fundamentals 先酱~ 原PO如想讨论我相信这里的众高手都很nice的 XD -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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