※ 引述《mondena (專心準備考試囉)》之銘言： : 各位大大好~ : 依照我自己原本的中文~ : 我大概把英文寫成這樣~ : ========================================================== : Dear Savill : First of all, thank you for your time to read my letter, : and raised a legitimate concern, that both show you have : great interest in our company. : 您好，首先感謝您閱讀敝公司之信件並提出您的看法， : 此皆顯示您對敝公司之重視。 We would like to thank you for your close attention to our letter and your invaluable comments. We really appreciate your interest in our company. : We are able to offer the samples of the production at once, : under the premise that you agreed and provided us the : details (ex: drawings). We must grasp the opportunity you bestow, : and meet your satisfaction. : 若您願意賜予敝公司服務的機會，敝公司可以立刻提供貴公司此項產品之樣本 : ，當然，此舉一定是在您認同許可並提供該產品細節資訊(例如：圖面)的情況 : 之下，敝公司可以保證樣本絕不會讓您失望及不滿。 We can provide immediately the product samples upon request; detailed information (e.g., 圖面）is also available. Our company is committed to client satisfaction and we are certain that you will not be disappointed. : Our main purpose is to emphasize our technology and facilities : enough to manufacturing the production, obviously, it's able to : understand that you couldn't know the original intention without : any business transactions between us. : 針對此項產品，我們的目的是想突顯敝公司有足夠的能力與技術可以生產 : 及製造，顯然，可以理解的是，在雙方未曾有交流的情況之下，很難讓您 : 明白此項初衷 : Sincerely, : ========================================================== : 請問這樣時態和文法有正確嗎? : 因為是自己練習寫的~希望可以聆聽各位大大的指教~ : 在翻譯成英文時~我有謹記版上大大們強調的"簡而易懂"~ : 可是又怕這樣的書信會讓新客戶覺得沒禮貌~(翻滾中) --

※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc) ◆ From: 202.144.217.10 謝謝…該剪指甲了 XD 分號是斷句，但前後句的關係還是很密切。我寫的是跟公司要就會給；但是有些公司會先 寄過去給客戶參考，那就是 we have taken the liberty and sent you... ※ 編輯: lifegetter 來自: 210.240.238.97 (01/10 17:31)