※ 引述《mondena (专心准备考试罗)》之铭言： : 各位大大好~ : 依照我自己原本的中文~ : 我大概把英文写成这样~ : ========================================================== : Dear Savill : First of all, thank you for your time to read my letter, : and raised a legitimate concern, that both show you have : great interest in our company. : 您好，首先感谢您阅读敝公司之信件并提出您的看法， : 此皆显示您对敝公司之重视。 We would like to thank you for your close attention to our letter and your invaluable comments. We really appreciate your interest in our company. : We are able to offer the samples of the production at once, : under the premise that you agreed and provided us the : details (ex: drawings). We must grasp the opportunity you bestow, : and meet your satisfaction. : 若您愿意赐予敝公司服务的机会，敝公司可以立刻提供贵公司此项产品之样本 : ，当然，此举一定是在您认同许可并提供该产品细节资讯(例如：图面)的情况 : 之下，敝公司可以保证样本绝不会让您失望及不满。 We can provide immediately the product samples upon request; detailed information (e.g., 图面）is also available. Our company is committed to client satisfaction and we are certain that you will not be disappointed. : Our main purpose is to emphasize our technology and facilities : enough to manufacturing the production, obviously, it's able to : understand that you couldn't know the original intention without : any business transactions between us. : 针对此项产品，我们的目的是想突显敝公司有足够的能力与技术可以生产 : 及制造，显然，可以理解的是，在双方未曾有交流的情况之下，很难让您 : 明白此项初衷 : Sincerely, : ========================================================== : 请问这样时态和文法有正确吗? : 因为是自己练习写的~希望可以聆听各位大大的指教~ : 在翻译成英文时~我有谨记版上大大们强调的"简而易懂"~ : 可是又怕这样的书信会让新客户觉得没礼貌~(翻滚中) --

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