作者dandanny (心情點滴)
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標題Re: [問題] 有關寫作的結構問題
時間Mon Jul 7 15:58:51 2008
※ 引述《interesting (無可厚非)》之銘言:
: 最近練習Independent Writing的時候,
: 常常會對第一段要怎麼寫有疑惑。
: 我一般來說的寫法是一開始將題目重新闡述一次
: 或是定義題目中的一些名詞。
: 第一段的最後一句才會寫出I agree/disagree
: 這樣寫評分者看起來會不會很不順眼?
: 因為native English speakers通常都會說
: 每一段第一句是topic sentence,之後敘述,detail,舉例。
: 我二三四段都這樣寫。
: 可是如果第一段第一句就直接寫I agree/disagree
: 第一段的後半部後面我往往就不知道要怎麼寫了
: 希望大大們指教:)
在補習班所學到的模板 通常會這樣說....
EX:你今天是喜歡上學 OR 在家裡自修 ,which one do you prefer and why?
Given the choice between going to school or studying at home, which one do I
prefer. It`s assumed that the answer is the latter. However, I prefer to go
school to study. There are three reasons presented as followed.
如果是要同意或不同意去學校上學才是對的
Given the choice between agreeing or disagreeing about going to school to
study, which one do I choose? It`s assumed that the answer is the latter.
However, I agree with the statement. There are three specific points of view
listed as followed.
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1F:推 JEIY3330:agreeing or disagreeing "with" going to school... 07/08 00:01
2F:→ dandanny:樓上 這邊已經變成 動名詞 不是動詞 所以可以用about了 07/08 07:33