作者dandanny (心情点滴)
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标题Re: [问题] 有关写作的结构问题
时间Mon Jul 7 15:58:51 2008
※ 引述《interesting (无可厚非)》之铭言：
: 最近练习Independent Writing的时候，
: 常常会对第一段要怎麽写有疑惑。
: 我一般来说的写法是一开始将题目重新阐述一次
: 或是定义题目中的一些名词。
: 第一段的最後一句才会写出I agree/disagree
: 这样写评分者看起来会不会很不顺眼?
: 因为native English speakers通常都会说
: 每一段第一句是topic sentence，之後叙述，detail，举例。
: 我二三四段都这样写。
: 可是如果第一段第一句就直接写I agree/disagree
: 第一段的後半部後面我往往就不知道要怎麽写了
: 希望大大们指教:)
在补习班所学到的模板 通常会这样说....
EX:你今天是喜欢上学 OR 在家里自修 ,which one do you prefer and why?
Given the choice between going to school or studying at home, which one do I
prefer. It`s assumed that the answer is the latter. However, I prefer to go
school to study. There are three reasons presented as followed.
如果是要同意或不同意去学校上学才是对的
Given the choice between agreeing or disagreeing about going to school to
study, which one do I choose? It`s assumed that the answer is the latter.
However, I agree with the statement. There are three specific points of view
listed as followed.
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1F：推 JEIY3330:agreeing or disagreeing "with" going to school... 07/08 00:01
2F：→ dandanny:楼上 这边已经变成 动名词 不是动词 所以可以用about了 07/08 07:33