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時間Mon Feb 13 23:40:02 2012
這邊作文的題目是要寫
1.運動的好處
2.你最喜歡做什麼運動,為什麼？
麻煩請各位版上的高手幫我修改,謝謝
There are many advantages for us to do exercise every day. First, we can keep
healthy via doing exercise regularly. Second, If you want to be in a good
shape, it is one of the great medicine much more effective than healthy
products. Third, you can also make a lot of congenial friends with common
hobbies.
Both baseball and basketball are my favorite sports. I had crushed on playing
baseball since I saw the cartoon-Major in elementary school. I really admire
the main characters in this cartoon, their awesome performance in
competitions and friendship made me envy. I played it very hard in order to
become the cartoons character-Honda. Although it doesn’t have many
opportunities to play baseball now, I still watch profession games on
television.
On the other hand, I also like to play basketball because the sports is easy
to play for me. When I made a three-points shots, I could get much of
accomplishment from it.
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