作者jt910203 (aa)
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标题[写作] 请帮我修改作文
时间Mon Feb 13 23:40:02 2012
这边作文的题目是要写
1.运动的好处
2.你最喜欢做什麽运动,为什麽？
麻烦请各位版上的高手帮我修改,谢谢
There are many advantages for us to do exercise every day. First, we can keep
healthy via doing exercise regularly. Second, If you want to be in a good
shape, it is one of the great medicine much more effective than healthy
products. Third, you can also make a lot of congenial friends with common
hobbies.
Both baseball and basketball are my favorite sports. I had crushed on playing
baseball since I saw the cartoon-Major in elementary school. I really admire
the main characters in this cartoon, their awesome performance in
competitions and friendship made me envy. I played it very hard in order to
become the cartoons character-Honda. Although it doesn’t have many
opportunities to play baseball now, I still watch profession games on
television.
On the other hand, I also like to play basketball because the sports is easy
to play for me. When I made a three-points shots, I could get much of
accomplishment from it.
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1F：→ karl790331:我建议你先去看traditional eassy 怎麽写，事实上 02/14 06:36
2F：→ karl790331:不讨论文法以及你要表达的，你的文章基本上不太符合英 02/14 06:37
3F：→ karl790331:文习惯阅读的方式，基本上照个英文方式去写，顺顺的可 02/14 06:37
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6F：→ hoch:可能的话请描述一下这作文是应付哪一种程度的考试。对想要建 02/14 09:11
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