題目是之前英文指考作文題目 對畢業典禮的看法並提出一些意見改善目前畢業典禮的現況 I think graduation ceremony should be heart-warming and commemorable. It will recall me the bitter sweet memories during school days by looking in those faces of classmates and teachers. Also attendance of parents , relatives and friends will make our graduates very emotional exciting. I consider that is a proud thing to accomplish one milestone of life with families’witness and blessing. Generally speaking , the leading light of the ceremony should be graduates , not those celebrities and officials. A long speech makes people drowsy and fidgets. That might leave audiences to find recreation such as taking photos and chatting to kill time. Let graduates come up to stage expressing feeling by random perhaps could catch audiences' attention. If these lucky fellows can receive presents at the same time, that will be fabulous. Otherwise,that will intensify the sorrow of departure and unsure of future if they see the old face always prized in the end of semesters going to stage celebrated again. 小人的目標是中高級 上次考得不理想只有60 希望從頭練起 所以句子很樸素 謝謝指教^ ^ --

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