以下是通過英檢高級的考生作文範例 (之前從官網下載的, 現在不知為何找不到了) Task-1題目是比較廣告的優缺點, 先paraphrase正反意見再提出自身觀點, Nowadays, advertisements and commercials are an important part of our lives. We see them everywhere, on television, in newspapers or magazines , on public transportations and even on the streets. Advertising has great influence on us, and there are both advantages and disadvantages. Advertising is simply trying to pursuade consumers into buying something. So in order to sell their products, some advertisements may be dishonest and consumers often will be fooled. Ads may also have bad influence on children, since children are most likely to believe anything. Being a smart consumer, we should think twice before buying a product. After all, money is hard to earn. On the other hand, advertising also has some advantages. We can get the latest informations of new products or services, so we could spend money on what we really need. Consumers can also compare different ads on a product to choose the best brand, and it may save a lot of money. We often see lots of commercials on TV. Personally, I like to watch TV commercials very much. I think commercials are full of great and interesting ideas. Some ideas may be funny and humorous, and some commercials might even have jingles or slangs that are easy to remember. All of this just to attract more consumers. I think a lot of their ideas are very cute, so commercials might as well be an art. We have to admit, advertising plays an important role in our daily lives. Although there are disadvantages and even may have bad influences, but as long as we think smart and don’t take everything in, there will be more advantages than we think. 我想稍微有做功課的考生, 應該都了解英檢正-反-合的題型。 基本上這篇作文的句構和用字並不怎麼高明, 感覺很像只有高中學生的作文程度, 部份拼字及文法也有問題(紅字標出), 所以當很多考生發現自己只有2分, 這篇卻能有3分以上的成績, 不免會懷疑標準LTTC的閱卷標準究竟為何。 (寫作Task2的範例答案一樣有不少錯誤，不過就先不貼出來。) ※ 引述《williamdenew (^^)》之銘言： : 讀完son--的心得文， : 我的感覺是son--在試前似乎沒弄清楚考試方式。 : 這點可從son--對口試題型的描述得到應證。 : 話說回來， : 討論的焦點是寫作部份， : 我不曉得son--是不是在試前便瞭解寫作測驗的要求? : 第一部分要求考生先摘要正反意見的文章， : 接著提出自己的觀點， : 最後必須總結。 : 這裡需要特別注意的是摘要和個人意見必須區分得清清楚楚。 : 此外，文章也必須具備基本架構 (起、承、轉、合)。 : 至於其他寫作上應該注意的細節 (比如標題置中、段落縮排、文法用字等) : 在此就不贅述了。 : 第二部分包括摘要和提供建議。 : 因為是圖表呈現， : 和第一個task相比簡單許多。 : 而且因為圖表就是那幾種， : (圓餅圖、長條圖之類[這不是我的專業領域，因此沒辦法精確描述。]) : 試前熟悉相關表示法應該就能準確表達。 : 最後是題型之外關於寫作方面的整體回顧: : 高級的寫作 : 1)文章結構應該要很清楚 : 2)內容自然要切題 : 3)用字遣詞務求精確 (特別是字詞搭配) : 用字倒不一定要艱深以顯示自己的語言能力 : 重點是用得巧妙，讓人眼睛為之一亮 : 尤其是動詞，可說是句子的關鍵 : 4)讀起來清楚流暢 : 換句話說，就是文章的風格 (style) 要讓讀者樂意閱|悅讀 : 講到字詞搭配 (collocation) : 建議高階英語能力者與英語教學者一定要具備字詞搭配的相關辭典或參考資料 : (_Oxford Collocations Dictionary_ 這本挺好用) : 寫作風格部分 : _The Elements of Style_ 是公認經典 : _Line by Line_ 則是我個人很喜歡的書 : 以上是個人小小意見， : 不足或有待討論之處還請大家補充。 ^^ : William --

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