作者trtr112 (pk)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 加入 when
時間Wed Jun 14 23:16:53 2023
想請教各位先進,
有一個句子:
This place has no real valley, Lazaridis says of Waterloo, and very little
silicon. But he believes it can become what he describes as the
world’s “quantum hub.”
請問我可以說:
This place has no real valley when Lazaridis says of Waterloo,and…. (加入
when, 去掉velley 之後的逗點).
這樣的改法是可以的嗎?
謝謝!
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1F：推 cuylerLin: 跟語氣或意見表達相關的動詞，例如 say, claim, think, 06/14 23:54
2F：→ cuylerLin: propose, maintain, qualify, suppose, suggest 等諸 06/14 23:54
3F：→ cuylerLin: 多動詞，可以直接放在兩個逗號之間視為插入語（parenth 06/14 23:54
4F：→ cuylerLin: etical phrase）的結構原本是 as-clause。所以此例還原 06/14 23:54
5F：→ cuylerLin: 應為「(as) Lazaridis says of Waterloo」。 06/14 23:54
6F：→ cuylerLin: 或者最簡單的理解直接看成對話內容，把上下引號補回去 06/15 00:04
7F：→ cuylerLin: 。 06/15 00:04
8F：推 kilva: This place has no real valley and very little silicon. 06/15 07:42
9F：→ kilva: 這整句話都是Lazaridis提到Waterloo時說的 06/15 07:42