作者trtr112 (pk)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 加入 when
时间Wed Jun 14 23:16:53 2023
想请教各位先进,
有一个句子:
This place has no real valley, Lazaridis says of Waterloo, and very little
silicon. But he believes it can become what he describes as the
world’s “quantum hub.”
请问我可以说:
This place has no real valley when Lazaridis says of Waterloo,and…. (加入
when, 去掉velley 之後的逗点).
这样的改法是可以的吗?
谢谢!
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1F：推 cuylerLin: 跟语气或意见表达相关的动词，例如 say, claim, think, 06/14 23:54
2F：→ cuylerLin: propose, maintain, qualify, suppose, suggest 等诸 06/14 23:54
3F：→ cuylerLin: 多动词，可以直接放在两个逗号之间视为插入语（parenth 06/14 23:54
4F：→ cuylerLin: etical phrase）的结构原本是 as-clause。所以此例还原 06/14 23:54
5F：→ cuylerLin: 应为「(as) Lazaridis says of Waterloo」。 06/14 23:54
6F：→ cuylerLin: 或者最简单的理解直接看成对话内容，把上下引号补回去 06/15 00:04
7F：→ cuylerLin: 。 06/15 00:04
8F：推 kilva: This place has no real valley and very little silicon. 06/15 07:42
9F：→ kilva: 这整句话都是Lazaridis提到Waterloo时说的 06/15 07:42