作者kikigirl (草莓心)
看板Eng-Class
標題Re: [請益] 做一些修改了，謝謝各位的幫忙!
時間Tue Jan 31 01:06:01 2012
當天的自我介紹朋友建議我不要死背，不要像念稿子一樣，
所以我應該會盡量口語一點?不知道是不是會比較好?
我想盡力就對了，因為當天面試有好多關卡阿，哈哈...
以下是我做的修改~
Good morning everyone. I'm Fansi . I am so excited to be here for your
interview.
I was born in Hsinchu .I graduated from National Hsinchu University of
Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a
preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. With ex-working experience, I
have learned how to work in a team.
I'm easygoing `friendly and responsible . In my spare time, I like to watch
movies、cook and reading. Traveling is the best choice to enrich my life.
I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meet different
people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation
can realize my dream. So that's why I am here. Thank you for your attention.
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※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc)
◆ From: 112.104.98.47
1F：→ Effin:英文裡沒有頓號喔要改成逗號但你是稿子沒關係只是提醒一下:) 01/31 01:18
2F：推 kanakanavu:強調團隊精神這點很好。但是之前的工作經驗英文不太對. 01/31 01:29
3F：→ kanakanavu:寫文章的話，可以說By the aid of the previous work 01/31 01:29
4F：→ kanakanavu:experience, I have ..... 01/31 01:30
5F：→ kanakanavu:但是口語的自我介紹可以說...Thanks for the previous 01/31 01:30
6F：→ kanakanavu:work experience, I learned how to work in a team 01/31 01:31
7F：→ kanakanavu:and made this team work well...(後面這一句是標榜 01/31 01:32
8F：→ kanakanavu:自己的能力)(洋人說話不會吝於誇獎自己...>_<~~) 01/31 01:33
9F：→ kanakanavu:(有一個typo Thanks for..... experience. <--(是句點) 01/31 01:35
10F：→ kikigirl:^_________^感謝喔! 01/31 01:46