作者kikigirl (草莓心)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 做一些修改了，谢谢各位的帮忙!
时间Tue Jan 31 01:06:01 2012
当天的自我介绍朋友建议我不要死背，不要像念稿子一样，
所以我应该会尽量口语一点?不知道是不是会比较好?
我想尽力就对了，因为当天面试有好多关卡阿，哈哈...
以下是我做的修改~
Good morning everyone. I'm Fansi . I am so excited to be here for your
interview.
I was born in Hsinchu .I graduated from National Hsinchu University of
Education ,and I major in Early Childhood Education. I used to work as a
preschool teacher in Hsinchu for five years. With ex-working experience, I
have learned how to work in a team.
I'm easygoing `friendly and responsible . In my spare time, I like to watch
movies、cook and reading. Traveling is the best choice to enrich my life.
I believe that life can be lively and meaningful. I want to meet different
people and learn from them. By working in Taiwan High Speed Rail Corporation
can realize my dream. So that's why I am here. Thank you for your attention.
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1F：→ Effin:英文里没有顿号喔要改成逗号但你是稿子没关系只是提醒一下:) 01/31 01:18
2F：推 kanakanavu:强调团队精神这点很好。但是之前的工作经验英文不太对. 01/31 01:29
3F：→ kanakanavu:写文章的话，可以说By the aid of the previous work 01/31 01:29
4F：→ kanakanavu:experience, I have ..... 01/31 01:30
5F：→ kanakanavu:但是口语的自我介绍可以说...Thanks for the previous 01/31 01:30
6F：→ kanakanavu:work experience, I learned how to work in a team 01/31 01:31
7F：→ kanakanavu:and made this team work well...(後面这一句是标榜 01/31 01:32
8F：→ kanakanavu:自己的能力)(洋人说话不会吝於夸奖自己...>_<~~) 01/31 01:33
9F：→ kanakanavu:(有一个typo Thanks for..... experience. <--(是句点) 01/31 01:35
10F：→ kikigirl:^_________^感谢喔! 01/31 01:46