作者herbaceous01 (我是笨蛋)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] Resume & cover letter 文法問題
時間Wed Jun 8 11:34:02 2011
各位好 :)
因為要應徵一間跨國企業的客戶開發工程師~ 它需求英文跟專業能力挺高的
我很努力的寫完cover letter 跟 resume
可是我的文法跟寫作能力跟native speaker 還是差了一大截~
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如果有版友願意幫忙 我會奉上僅剩的一點點P幣~
如果您在新竹的話我會願意請您喝杯飲料 QQ
-- resume 可能需要幫忙的字句
Objective: I noticed that there is a XXX opening; I am looking forward
to the opportunity, which is able to work in my dram company and with people
internally.
Experience: Instrument analysis experiment teaching assistant
* Helping student to understand basic theory of analysis instruments.
* Instruments troubles shooting.
Organic Chemistry experiment teaching assistant
* Helping student understand basic concept of organic chemistry.
* Solving emergency or dangers situation occur by experiment.
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因為~cover letter全部貼上來我怕會讓大家沒有耐心 QQ~
所以~請願意幫忙的版友~丟我水球~ 我會再寄信給您~ 謝謝~~~
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◆ From: 163.22.18.23
1F：→ heziying:there is an opening for XXX(job title吧?) 06/08 14:51
2F：→ heziying:which is *to be* able to work in my *dream* company 06/08 14:52
3F：→ heziying:with people internally是甚麼意思? 這樣寫不太清楚 在 06/08 14:52
4F：→ heziying:某一個地方裡面"應該不是你想表達的意思吧 :P 06/08 14:53
5F：→ heziying:experience部份可能應該把Teaching Assistant放在前面 06/08 14:57
6F：→ heziying:因為英文這麼寫有點太囉囌的感覺,不知道position到底叫啥 06/08 14:58
7F：→ heziying:然後*的,要用現在式或過去式,如Helped students或Help 06/08 14:59
8F：→ heziying:dangers -> dangerous. 最後,把Instruments trouble- 06/08 14:59
9F：→ heziying:shooting改成Trouble-shoot(那是現在式,不知道哪一個適合 06/08 15:00
10F：→ heziying:你工作情況) 希望有幫上忙~ ^^ 06/08 15:00