作者herbaceous01 (我是笨蛋)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] Resume & cover letter 文法问题
时间Wed Jun 8 11:34:02 2011
各位好 :)
因为要应徵一间跨国企业的客户开发工程师~ 它需求英文跟专业能力挺高的
我很努力的写完cover letter 跟 resume
可是我的文法跟写作能力跟native speaker 还是差了一大截~
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如果有版友愿意帮忙 我会奉上仅剩的一点点P币~
如果您在新竹的话我会愿意请您喝杯饮料 QQ
-- resume 可能需要帮忙的字句
Objective: I noticed that there is a XXX opening; I am looking forward
to the opportunity, which is able to work in my dram company and with people
internally.
Experience: Instrument analysis experiment teaching assistant
* Helping student to understand basic theory of analysis instruments.
* Instruments troubles shooting.
Organic Chemistry experiment teaching assistant
* Helping student understand basic concept of organic chemistry.
* Solving emergency or dangers situation occur by experiment.
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因为~cover letter全部贴上来我怕会让大家没有耐心 QQ~
所以~请愿意帮忙的版友~丢我水球~ 我会再寄信给您~ 谢谢~~~
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1F：→ heziying:there is an opening for XXX(job title吧?) 06/08 14:51
2F：→ heziying:which is *to be* able to work in my *dream* company 06/08 14:52
3F：→ heziying:with people internally是甚麽意思? 这样写不太清楚 在 06/08 14:52
4F：→ heziying:某一个地方里面"应该不是你想表达的意思吧 :P 06/08 14:53
5F：→ heziying:experience部份可能应该把Teaching Assistant放在前面 06/08 14:57
6F：→ heziying:因为英文这麽写有点太罗苏的感觉,不知道position到底叫啥 06/08 14:58
7F：→ heziying:然後*的,要用现在式或过去式,如Helped students或Help 06/08 14:59
8F：→ heziying:dangers -> dangerous. 最後,把Instruments trouble- 06/08 14:59
9F：→ heziying:shooting改成Trouble-shoot(那是现在式,不知道哪一个适合 06/08 15:00
10F：→ heziying:你工作情况) 希望有帮上忙~ ^^ 06/08 15:00