作者sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)
看板Eng-Class
標題[求譯] 請問一句很生活的描述...
時間Sat Feb 12 11:57:50 2011
求英譯：
我放了一盒跟你之前送給我一樣的糖果在桌上，
所以我每次看到那盒糖或吃那個糖，就會不自覺得想到你
我的試譯:
I put a box of the caramel candy on my desk, which is the same with you
gave to me, so when I eat or see the box, I always think of you.
提問：
我想問which應該放在甚麼位置比較好呢?
Which 可以接在candy後面 因為是描述糖果
這是這樣又會離on my desk太遠...
另外which 那句話又覺得有點怪~~但不知道哪裡怪@@
希望版上的朋友能幫忙解惑~~謝謝!!
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1F：推 kenotic:I pout on my desk a box of caramel candy, which... 02/12 12:01
2F：→ kenotic: put 02/12 12:01
3F：→ kenotic:which is the same as (the one) you gave me, 02/12 12:03
4F：→ kerorolover:我會用keep cc...... 02/12 12:19
5F：→ kerorolover:I keep the same kind of candy on my desk, which 02/12 12:21
6F：→ kerorolover:let me recall you, when I eat or see it.() 02/12 12:22
7F：→ kerorolover:不知行不行 02/12 12:23
8F：→ kerorolover:（you sent me）加到句子中 剛忘了 02/12 12:24
9F：→ Bigfatty73:Box of c-candy put on desk I have; gift as yours it 02/12 13:45
10F：→ Bigfatty73:is. Think of you I shall when taste and see of it 02/12 13:47
11F：推 heziying:I put a box of the same type of caramel candy that 02/12 15:07
12F：→ heziying:you gave me on my desk, so whenever I see the box or 02/12 15:07
13F：→ heziying:eat one of the candies, I think of you :) 02/12 15:07
14F：→ kerorolover:個人覺得：任何語言的使用，大抵都是簡要精確為上，能 02/12 17:36
15F：→ kerorolover:用一句話說，就不用第二句話。除了是改寫，不然翻譯 02/12 17:36
16F：→ kerorolover:應該也是吧？ 02/12 17:36
17F：→ dunchee:要看情況。語言在使用時不可能只有一種用法，一種原則。 02/12 22:01
18F：→ dunchee:就以"同一句話"來說好了，你不可能沒有遇過"一說再說"的場 02/12 22:02
19F：→ dunchee:合/情況。它還是有它的特定用處/適用場合。最重要的是懂得 02/12 22:03
20F：→ dunchee:在什麼時候使用最適當的方式表達，而不是聽/學了*某一*原 02/12 22:03
21F：→ dunchee:則/規則就以為都是要這樣子才可以 02/12 22:04
22F：→ kerorolover:謝謝dunchee大大!! 02/12 22:41
23F：→ alixia:I have on my desk a box of caramel candy, the kind you 02/13 09:05
24F：→ alixia:gave me last time. It reminds me of you whenever my 02/13 09:06
25F：→ alixia:eyes fall on it. 02/13 09:06