作者sluggard (~Halcyon Days~)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 请问一句很生活的描述...
时间Sat Feb 12 11:57:50 2011
求英译：
我放了一盒跟你之前送给我一样的糖果在桌上，
所以我每次看到那盒糖或吃那个糖，就会不自觉得想到你
我的试译:
I put a box of the caramel candy on my desk, which is the same with you
gave to me, so when I eat or see the box, I always think of you.
提问：
我想问which应该放在甚麽位置比较好呢?
Which 可以接在candy後面 因为是描述糖果
这是这样又会离on my desk太远...
另外which 那句话又觉得有点怪~~但不知道哪里怪@@
希望版上的朋友能帮忙解惑~~谢谢!!
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1F：推 kenotic:I pout on my desk a box of caramel candy, which... 02/12 12:01
2F：→ kenotic: put 02/12 12:01
3F：→ kenotic:which is the same as (the one) you gave me, 02/12 12:03
4F：→ kerorolover:我会用keep cc...... 02/12 12:19
5F：→ kerorolover:I keep the same kind of candy on my desk, which 02/12 12:21
6F：→ kerorolover:let me recall you, when I eat or see it.() 02/12 12:22
7F：→ kerorolover:不知行不行 02/12 12:23
8F：→ kerorolover:（you sent me）加到句子中 刚忘了 02/12 12:24
9F：→ Bigfatty73:Box of c-candy put on desk I have; gift as yours it 02/12 13:45
10F：→ Bigfatty73:is. Think of you I shall when taste and see of it 02/12 13:47
11F：推 heziying:I put a box of the same type of caramel candy that 02/12 15:07
12F：→ heziying:you gave me on my desk, so whenever I see the box or 02/12 15:07
13F：→ heziying:eat one of the candies, I think of you :) 02/12 15:07
14F：→ kerorolover:个人觉得：任何语言的使用，大抵都是简要精确为上，能 02/12 17:36
15F：→ kerorolover:用一句话说，就不用第二句话。除了是改写，不然翻译 02/12 17:36
16F：→ kerorolover:应该也是吧？ 02/12 17:36
17F：→ dunchee:要看情况。语言在使用时不可能只有一种用法，一种原则。 02/12 22:01
18F：→ dunchee:就以"同一句话"来说好了，你不可能没有遇过"一说再说"的场 02/12 22:02
19F：→ dunchee:合/情况。它还是有它的特定用处/适用场合。最重要的是懂得 02/12 22:03
20F：→ dunchee:在什麽时候使用最适当的方式表达，而不是听/学了*某一*原 02/12 22:03
21F：→ dunchee:则/规则就以为都是要这样子才可以 02/12 22:04
22F：→ kerorolover:谢谢dunchee大大!! 02/12 22:41
23F：→ alixia:I have on my desk a box of caramel candy, the kind you 02/13 09:05
24F：→ alixia:gave me last time. It reminds me of you whenever my 02/13 09:06
25F：→ alixia:eyes fall on it. 02/13 09:06