小弟現在在上某地方的英文寫作課 老師給了我們三個短句叫我們練習 sentence building 因為我文法超爛，也沒有甚麼構句的概念 之前準備多益也只有練習聽跟讀（七百出頭），用說跟寫就會卡住了，很卡。 而且感覺文法超錯誤連篇 三個短句我花了一個半小時寫了又刪刪了又改，越加越長感覺變成小短文了 在這鼓起勇氣po給各位老師看，希望能給我意見教我如何改進，謝謝 1. The man is an employee. 我：The young man who wears a stereotypical glasses and colorful tie, called Ryan,is an employee who join this company recently,full of enthusiasm,wants to do a great thing to earn approval and compliment from his colleagues and boss. 2.The managers are having a meeting. 我：The managers comes from different departments,such as Human Resourses Department,Adiministration Department,Marketing Department,etc,are having a extremely important annual meeting in the conference room at 6 floor. 3.Apple is a company. 我：Apple is a full of fashion and creativity company,which manufactured lots of fun,functional and efficient products.Such as Macbook,i Pod Touch, i Phone,etc.Some people even tattoo the "Apple logo"on their body.Apple always make waves impact the world when they release new products. 我知道亂七八糟，從今以後我會好好學習文法的，謝謝各位老師的指教 >.<" --

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