小弟现在在上某地方的英文写作课 老师给了我们三个短句叫我们练习 sentence building 因为我文法超烂，也没有甚麽构句的概念 之前准备多益也只有练习听跟读（七百出头），用说跟写就会卡住了，很卡。 而且感觉文法超错误连篇 三个短句我花了一个半小时写了又删删了又改，越加越长感觉变成小短文了 在这鼓起勇气po给各位老师看，希望能给我意见教我如何改进，谢谢 1. The man is an employee. 我：The young man who wears a stereotypical glasses and colorful tie, called Ryan,is an employee who join this company recently,full of enthusiasm,wants to do a great thing to earn approval and compliment from his colleagues and boss. 2.The managers are having a meeting. 我：The managers comes from different departments,such as Human Resourses Department,Adiministration Department,Marketing Department,etc,are having a extremely important annual meeting in the conference room at 6 floor. 3.Apple is a company. 我：Apple is a full of fashion and creativity company,which manufactured lots of fun,functional and efficient products.Such as Macbook,i Pod Touch, i Phone,etc.Some people even tattoo the "Apple logo"on their body.Apple always make waves impact the world when they release new products. 我知道乱七八糟，从今以後我会好好学习文法的，谢谢各位老师的指教 >.<" --

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