作者rubric (其實我正在找第幾篇)
看板Eng-Class
標題Re: [請益] 一句話的修飾
時間Mon Dec 6 02:42:41 2010
※ 引述《potentiality ( )》之銘言：
: 請問以下這句話，可以如何修改，才不會一直重複which呢?
: (除了把Which 改成前方的名詞外)
: 真是想好久阿...
: 謝謝!
: In this course, I emphasized the importance of clarity
: in English writing, which is very different from Chinese writing,
: which values the style of poetic obscurity.
In this course, I emphasized that English writing values the importance
of clarity, while Chinese writing the style of poetic obscurity.
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