作者rubric (其实我正在找第几篇)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 一句话的修饰
时间Mon Dec 6 02:42:41 2010
※ 引述《potentiality ( )》之铭言：
: 请问以下这句话，可以如何修改，才不会一直重复which呢?
: (除了把Which 改成前方的名词外)
: 真是想好久阿...
: 谢谢!
: In this course, I emphasized the importance of clarity
: in English writing, which is very different from Chinese writing,
: which values the style of poetic obscurity.
In this course, I emphasized that English writing values the importance
of clarity, while Chinese writing the style of poetic obscurity.
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