原po應有法律背景，且英文用字下過一番功夫，所以我可能評的細一點 用PTT評起來好累~~寫的累，看得更累... : As we all know, we have one big trouble recently. Maybe it can be described as ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^生硬 ^^^^^不必maybe : ''the huge typhoon in Judiciary''. Judge 蕭 - the Judge of Supreme Court - 我會寫成 "a huge typhoon in the Judiciary" = [台灣]法界的一個大風暴 a 不具指定性，the 則具指定性 the^^^ a^^^ Hsiao中文人名有固定音譯，勿中英混用 - a judge in ... 代表蕭是大法官"之一"，如用the則變成"唯一" ^^^ e.g. Ma is the president of Taiwan 馬是台灣總統 (只有一個) Ma is a president attending the summit 馬是參加高峰會的總統 (之一) 另外"大法官"好像是譯為 [Supreme Court] Justice : influence illegal Judge 高 in Taiwan High Court on the case of ->illegally influence "非法" "影響"，不是illegal judge "非法" "高法官" XD illegally influence Judge Kao in [the] Taiwan High Court 是高法官在高院，還是 非法關說在高院? 有點不清楚。如用逗號(或其他方式)分隔就清楚知道是高法官在高院。 ->Judge Kao, a judge in the High Court on the case of -> IN the case of : 蕭's son that he got away without looking after someone who was hurt in car Hsiao's son. 上面講關說案，下面要講蕭子之案，最好另起新句 got away without looking 應該是 hit-and-run (肇逃) 吧? Hsiao's son was charged with hit-and-run "蕭子被告肇逃"應該就可以了 或是講細一點: Hsiao's son was found guilty in a hit-and-run case at the district level, and he was on appeal at the high court. 蕭子一審被判肇逃 有罪，那時正在上訴高院。(不負責英文法律名詞) : accident that he made. Basically speaking, as the professional viewpoint, as the professional viewpoint = from a professional viewpoint : hit-and-run charge is not felony, and the guilty driver maybe punished as fine ->A hit-and-run is not A felony 單數名詞要有冠詞 felony, and->felony, AS... 代表因果關係 (as=因為) : or short-term imprisonment. However, ^^^^^^^^^^"短期"不精準，我記得"1年以下"就不算felony ... as the crime is punishable by fine or imprisonment of less than a year. : What the intention dose Judge 蕭 have to involve in the scandal, and he care : nothing about how great price he should pay for it.Reportedly he hope his son 這句到這裡不太懂原PO要說甚麼^^ : who hit-and-run guy is can be pronounced not guilty, and this guy can take part "his son who hit-and-run guy" 文法不通 ^^^^^^^^是誰? : in the qualification text of Judge and Procurator annually without any record exams for ^^^^^^^^^^Prosecutor? Solicitor? : of previous crime. However we can find it is out of the question by reviewing record of previous crime=criminal record ^^what is "it"? not guilty? taking exams? criminal records? : the evidence of this case. : Sympathy we have for a father with anxiety about his son's trouble, the glory 全天下只有星際大戰的尤達大師可以這樣倒裝 "Sympathy we have" XD ->We have sympathy... a father's anxiety for ... / a father who is anxious for 都比較好 : of status is not his own property nevertheless, and he have no right to order the glory of status? he HAS : Judge高 to obey what the instruction he give. As a member of judiciary work, his instructions. of the Judiciary, : his behavior brings shame on whole worker in territory of judiciary. to the whole Judiciary. 這裡Judiciary用兩次，所以第一次可能要再改為 As a Supreme Court Justice, his... 文法問題還蠻多的，但是看得出來原PO在單字上下了番功夫 加油~ -- Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something. -Plato (427BC-347BC) Plato is boring. -Frederich Nietzsche (1844-1900) Nietzsche was stupid and abnormal. -Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910) --

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