原po应有法律背景，且英文用字下过一番功夫，所以我可能评的细一点 用PTT评起来好累~~写的累，看得更累... : As we all know, we have one big trouble recently. Maybe it can be described as ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^生硬 ^^^^^不必maybe : ''the huge typhoon in Judiciary''. Judge 萧 - the Judge of Supreme Court - 我会写成 "a huge typhoon in the Judiciary" = [台湾]法界的一个大风暴 a 不具指定性，the 则具指定性 the^^^ a^^^ Hsiao中文人名有固定音译，勿中英混用 - a judge in ... 代表萧是大法官"之一"，如用the则变成"唯一" ^^^ e.g. Ma is the president of Taiwan 马是台湾总统 (只有一个) Ma is a president attending the summit 马是参加高峰会的总统 (之一) 另外"大法官"好像是译为 [Supreme Court] Justice : influence illegal Judge 高 in Taiwan High Court on the case of ->illegally influence "非法" "影响"，不是illegal judge "非法" "高法官" XD illegally influence Judge Kao in [the] Taiwan High Court 是高法官在高院，还是 非法关说在高院? 有点不清楚。如用逗号(或其他方式)分隔就清楚知道是高法官在高院。 ->Judge Kao, a judge in the High Court on the case of -> IN the case of : 萧's son that he got away without looking after someone who was hurt in car Hsiao's son. 上面讲关说案，下面要讲萧子之案，最好另起新句 got away without looking 应该是 hit-and-run (肇逃) 吧? Hsiao's son was charged with hit-and-run "萧子被告肇逃"应该就可以了 或是讲细一点: Hsiao's son was found guilty in a hit-and-run case at the district level, and he was on appeal at the high court. 萧子一审被判肇逃 有罪，那时正在上诉高院。(不负责英文法律名词) : accident that he made. Basically speaking, as the professional viewpoint, as the professional viewpoint = from a professional viewpoint : hit-and-run charge is not felony, and the guilty driver maybe punished as fine ->A hit-and-run is not A felony 单数名词要有冠词 felony, and->felony, AS... 代表因果关系 (as=因为) : or short-term imprisonment. However, ^^^^^^^^^^"短期"不精准，我记得"1年以下"就不算felony ... as the crime is punishable by fine or imprisonment of less than a year. : What the intention dose Judge 萧 have to involve in the scandal, and he care : nothing about how great price he should pay for it.Reportedly he hope his son 这句到这里不太懂原PO要说甚麽^^ : who hit-and-run guy is can be pronounced not guilty, and this guy can take part "his son who hit-and-run guy" 文法不通 ^^^^^^^^是谁? : in the qualification text of Judge and Procurator annually without any record exams for ^^^^^^^^^^Prosecutor? Solicitor? : of previous crime. However we can find it is out of the question by reviewing record of previous crime=criminal record ^^what is "it"? not guilty? taking exams? criminal records? : the evidence of this case. : Sympathy we have for a father with anxiety about his son's trouble, the glory 全天下只有星际大战的尤达大师可以这样倒装 "Sympathy we have" XD ->We have sympathy... a father's anxiety for ... / a father who is anxious for 都比较好 : of status is not his own property nevertheless, and he have no right to order the glory of status? he HAS : Judge高 to obey what the instruction he give. As a member of judiciary work, his instructions. of the Judiciary, : his behavior brings shame on whole worker in territory of judiciary. to the whole Judiciary. 这里Judiciary用两次，所以第一次可能要再改为 As a Supreme Court Justice, his... 文法问题还蛮多的，但是看得出来原PO在单字上下了番功夫 加油~ -- Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something. -Plato (427BC-347BC) Plato is boring. -Frederich Nietzsche (1844-1900) Nietzsche was stupid and abnormal. -Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910) --

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