作者charatible (反省しろ(┘∀└))
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 商業英語mail---推銷產品
時間Mon Aug 16 22:56:12 2010
兩個禮拜前開始寫email做推銷,但是不太確定該怎樣寫較好...
到現在只有幾封回信...我發了很多封喔!
我想問一下我的寫法對嗎?
請告訴小弟我哪裡錯了>"<
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Dear Ms.Kozokaro,
Please allow me to introduce myself, I am Alfonso Jehleutti
from Yesterday Technology Co, Ltd. YT.Tech is a very famous
company of filter industry in Taichung, Taiwan. Top quality
and continuous invention are always our motto, therefore
our manufactures are highly valued by clients around the world.
It will be such a pleasant opportunity to start a cooperation
with GoodGoal Today Co., Ltd. We would like to ask you if you
are interested in our goods and want to expand marketing in
asia, it will be truly a great begining ever.
Now YT.Tech has many kinds of manufactures as high efficiency
filter, roller filter, reverse filter, stern clarify system and
crystal deco system...etc. If you want to know more about our
inventions, please reply me then I will send you an explicit
catalogue asap.
Your prompt reply will be obliged.
Alfonso Jehleutti
Sales Agent
Yesterday Technology CO.,Ltd.
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謝謝大家
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※ 發信站: 批踢踢實業坊(ptt.cc)
◆ From: 114.39.17.77
1F：→ tengharold:沒人回是因為unsolicited email=spam，人家幾乎都直接 08/17 03:01
2F：→ tengharold:砍掉。其實文章還好，錯誤不多，但這樣發email有人回 08/17 03:02
3F：→ tengharold:然後沒人舉報你發SPAM已經不錯了~ 08/17 03:02