作者charatible (反省しろ(┘∀└))
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 商业英语mail---推销产品
时间Mon Aug 16 22:56:12 2010
两个礼拜前开始写email做推销,但是不太确定该怎样写较好...
到现在只有几封回信...我发了很多封喔!
我想问一下我的写法对吗?
请告诉小弟我哪里错了>"<
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Dear Ms.Kozokaro,
Please allow me to introduce myself, I am Alfonso Jehleutti
from Yesterday Technology Co, Ltd. YT.Tech is a very famous
company of filter industry in Taichung, Taiwan. Top quality
and continuous invention are always our motto, therefore
our manufactures are highly valued by clients around the world.
It will be such a pleasant opportunity to start a cooperation
with GoodGoal Today Co., Ltd. We would like to ask you if you
are interested in our goods and want to expand marketing in
asia, it will be truly a great begining ever.
Now YT.Tech has many kinds of manufactures as high efficiency
filter, roller filter, reverse filter, stern clarify system and
crystal deco system...etc. If you want to know more about our
inventions, please reply me then I will send you an explicit
catalogue asap.
Your prompt reply will be obliged.
Alfonso Jehleutti
Sales Agent
Yesterday Technology CO.,Ltd.
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谢谢大家
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※ 发信站: 批踢踢实业坊(ptt.cc)
◆ From: 114.39.17.77
1F：→ tengharold:没人回是因为unsolicited email=spam，人家几乎都直接 08/17 03:01
2F：→ tengharold:砍掉。其实文章还好，错误不多，但这样发email有人回 08/17 03:02
3F：→ tengharold:然後没人举报你发SPAM已经不错了~ 08/17 03:02