作者supernatural (supernatural)
看板Eng-Class
標題[文法] 請問這樣寫可以嗎?
時間Tue Jun 29 11:37:32 2010
She accidentally ate a carton of chocolate that your boss
want to give to his client.
她不小心吃了老闆要給客戶的巧克力.
Her boss is very angry,but he don t know who eat chocolate,
he ordered that his employees work overtime.
她的老闆很生氣 但不知道誰吃了巧克力 所以命令員工加班
請問這兩句這樣寫正確嗎? 有錯的話幫糾正 謝謝
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╠═╬═卒═帥═馬═╬═╬═╬═╣
║ ║ ║ ║╲║╱║ ║ ║ ║ 此時，
╠═╬═╬═車═╬═╬═╬═╬═╣ 帥有何用？
║ ║ ║ ║╱║╲║ ║ ║ ║ 有車又如何？
╚═╩═╩═╩═╩═╩═╩═╩═╝ 有馬子又怎樣？
幹她媽的，有帥又有車，馬子當然可以當砲打啊！！
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1F：→ grandrapid:第一句應該是her boss吧?是你老闆還是她老闆= =? 06/29 15:44
2F：→ grandrapid:wants 下面應該是who ate chocolates angry句號 06/29 15:48
3F：→ grandrapid:後面But換下一句 06/29 15:48
4F：→ grandrapid:wanted好像比較好 下面一開始你用現在式後面order又變 06/29 15:49
5F：→ grandrapid:過去式,文意有點怪?命令員工加班後還在生氣嗎?? 06/29 15:50
6F：→ alixia:Her boss was very angry. Not knowing who ate the 06/29 16:59
7F：→ alixia:chocolate, he has everyone working overtime. 06/29 16:59
8F：→ alixia:she ate the box of chocolate which was meant for the 06/29 17:01
9F：→ alixia:her boss' client. (拿掉the) 06/29 17:02
10F：推 sonico:好想比較少看到to V to ... 的句子 (我的經驗啦) 06/29 22:44
11F：→ sonico:想請問一般寫作會避免這種情形嗎? 06/29 22:45