作者DouglasLee (Alkanale)
看板Eng-Class
標題[請益] 一段句子是否正確
時間Sun May 2 15:14:50 2010
寫了一段文字
可是敝人現在正在當兵
怕腦殘了有些錯誤
奢求各位幫忙改正或給點建議,謝謝
It's actually funny that
people asking for something eternal,
but plunge themselves into a slightly space-time;
wishing to have someone
holding their crinkly old hands when the world collapse,
but wouldn't give a lightful care.
It's not about who's right,
but about who's left.
感謝大家
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1F：→ priv:lightful means bright... be sure that it's what you mean 05/02 15:46
2F：→ priv:btw, people asking = people who ask 05/02 15:49
3F：→ priv:maybe you mean 'people ask' 05/02 15:49
4F：→ priv:And about lightful, maybe you mean 'slightest'? 05/02 15:52
5F：→ DouglasLee:對耶 我還真沒發現 謝謝priv! 05/02 15:57
6F：→ DouglasLee:至於lightful其實我也覺得用得不好,還在想那個對的詞 05/02 15:58
7F：→ DouglasLee:asking改成ask那下面的wishing也是改回wish囉? 05/02 15:59
8F：→ priv:分號的用法其實我不熟，看看有沒有別人可以幫你XD 05/02 16:04
9F：→ DouglasLee:還是相當感謝P大:D 05/02 16:05
10F：推 iken8782:分號後面 也要完整獨立子句 或是 接conj或transitions 05/06 15:59