作者DouglasLee (Alkanale)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 一段句子是否正确
时间Sun May 2 15:14:50 2010
写了一段文字
可是敝人现在正在当兵
怕脑残了有些错误
奢求各位帮忙改正或给点建议,谢谢
It's actually funny that
people asking for something eternal,
but plunge themselves into a slightly space-time;
wishing to have someone
holding their crinkly old hands when the world collapse,
but wouldn't give a lightful care.
It's not about who's right,
but about who's left.
感谢大家
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1F：→ priv:lightful means bright... be sure that it's what you mean 05/02 15:46
2F：→ priv:btw, people asking = people who ask 05/02 15:49
3F：→ priv:maybe you mean 'people ask' 05/02 15:49
4F：→ priv:And about lightful, maybe you mean 'slightest'? 05/02 15:52
5F：→ DouglasLee:对耶 我还真没发现 谢谢priv! 05/02 15:57
6F：→ DouglasLee:至於lightful其实我也觉得用得不好,还在想那个对的词 05/02 15:58
7F：→ DouglasLee:asking改成ask那下面的wishing也是改回wish罗? 05/02 15:59
8F：→ priv:分号的用法其实我不熟，看看有没有别人可以帮你XD 05/02 16:04
9F：→ DouglasLee:还是相当感谢P大:D 05/02 16:05
10F：推 iken8782:分号後面 也要完整独立子句 或是 接conj或transitions 05/06 15:59