作者scream7 (股神 Aka)
看板Eng-Class
標題Re: [請益] 政大97年作文
時間Sun Feb 28 16:51:33 2010
※ 引述《avene0510 (....)》之銘言：
: 題目:
: How people Respond to fear
: 請寫出300字英文作文
: 不知道大家都會怎寫呢?
: 可以給各大方向嗎?
: 謝謝!
Below is the English composition structure:
Officially, there always are 3 or 5 paragraphs in an essay.
I. Introduction -Hook:Put in the very first part of a composition to
draw reader's attention. Usually expressed with
questions or quotations.
-Content
-Thesis statement: A sentence contains the outline of
Body part.
ex: I think___,because of A,B and C.
II. Body i. Explain A,Reason,examples
ii. Explain B,Reason,examples
iii. Explain C,Reason,examples
III. Conclusion -Integrated opinions.
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"How people respond to fear"
Have you ever confronted the situations that fear you? I think it's
a common negative emotions that human beings always try to solve. In my
opinion,the right attitude we should take is finding the root of fear,
striving all efforts to find solutions, and learning to adapt to the conditions
when there's no way to solve it.
If we know the basis of our fear, then we could have brainstorming
the best solution to it. For instance, I was afraid of approaching water in my
childhood,due to once upon a time I ever drowned in the swimming pool.
Eventually I became good at swimming, water is not the root of my fear
anymore. I got the braveness to conquer my fear, as you can in the future.
Sometimes we know the causes of our fear, but we are incapable to
overcome the obstacles. Potential as we are, we definitely own the
chances to solve it, depends on how hard we try. Keep working,keep trying,
nothing impossible to our ability.
Hard situations always exist around us. If solveless, we should
prepare our mind to think a healthy way and ready to welcome a better
tomorrow.
Various of methods to solve our fear, choose a way that meets
your need. At times,others can offer you help, but the keypoint is yourself.
Do you face fear with positive attitude? It's a very important issue
for you to ponder.
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作文可以架構嚴謹,亦可不落俗套,端看筆者喜好的呈現方式...
我不會說自己這篇是在獻醜,因為我所受的教育使然,分享諸位聞香一番... :)
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1F：推 Rain2207:很好 勇於分享 good, 有人要一起回應嗎? 我覺得很棒 02/28 19:43
2F：推 shiyachan:fearness→fear , I "am" afraid of @@ 02/28 19:58
Thanks for reminding. Originally I suggested that there must be some
diversity between noun and verb of "fear". It seemed that I am too naive
and lack of acquirements. Gotta study! XD
※ 編輯: scream7 來自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:07)
3F：→ shiyachan:bravenesse我覺得改成bravery或courage比較好@@" 02/28 20:00
小的斗膽一提,bravery是大概念性的名詞,草民敘述個人小感覺使用小概念名詞就夠了(?)
舉例來說:
jewel 指稱寶石首飾
jewelry 總稱寶石
何人敢口出狂言誇稱自己買了jewelry(所有寶石的總稱)? XDXDDDDD
※ 編輯: scream7 來自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:12)
4F：推 layles:請問第二段due to後面可以接一個句子嗎? 03/02 13:48
5F：推 layles:請問could have brainstorming是??? 03/02 14:00
6F：推 layles:第二段第一句時式好像很怪......modal好像也沒這東西 03/02 14:16
7F：推 layles:另外，第一段第一句的fear(v)的主詞可以不是人嗎? 03/02 14:34
8F：→ scream7:could表現比can更加委婉客氣,用法穿越時空所在多有 :) 03/03 15:51
9F：推 shiyachan:braveness我在英文字典中翻不到~所以今天問了老師~老師 03/03 23:49
10F：→ shiyachan:的意見是說bravery或courage比較好~而至於braveness~老 03/03 23:50
11F：→ shiyachan:師則是猜測是後來才有的~形成方式可能是不知道怎麼改名 03/03 23:50
12F：→ shiyachan:詞~就直接加ness~ 03/03 23:51
13F：推 shiyachan:fear我看到的句子都是以人當主詞~至於能不能不是人~我 03/03 23:54
14F：→ shiyachan:不清楚@@" 不過due to 的 to 是介係詞是可以肯定的:) 03/03 23:55