作者scream7 (股神 Aka)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [请益] 政大97年作文
时间Sun Feb 28 16:51:33 2010
※ 引述《avene0510 (....)》之铭言：
: 题目:
: How people Respond to fear
: 请写出300字英文作文
: 不知道大家都会怎写呢?
: 可以给各大方向吗?
: 谢谢!
Below is the English composition structure:
Officially, there always are 3 or 5 paragraphs in an essay.
I. Introduction -Hook:Put in the very first part of a composition to
draw reader's attention. Usually expressed with
questions or quotations.
-Content
-Thesis statement: A sentence contains the outline of
Body part.
ex: I think___,because of A,B and C.
II. Body i. Explain A,Reason,examples
ii. Explain B,Reason,examples
iii. Explain C,Reason,examples
III. Conclusion -Integrated opinions.
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"How people respond to fear"
Have you ever confronted the situations that fear you? I think it's
a common negative emotions that human beings always try to solve. In my
opinion,the right attitude we should take is finding the root of fear,
striving all efforts to find solutions, and learning to adapt to the conditions
when there's no way to solve it.
If we know the basis of our fear, then we could have brainstorming
the best solution to it. For instance, I was afraid of approaching water in my
childhood,due to once upon a time I ever drowned in the swimming pool.
Eventually I became good at swimming, water is not the root of my fear
anymore. I got the braveness to conquer my fear, as you can in the future.
Sometimes we know the causes of our fear, but we are incapable to
overcome the obstacles. Potential as we are, we definitely own the
chances to solve it, depends on how hard we try. Keep working,keep trying,
nothing impossible to our ability.
Hard situations always exist around us. If solveless, we should
prepare our mind to think a healthy way and ready to welcome a better
tomorrow.
Various of methods to solve our fear, choose a way that meets
your need. At times,others can offer you help, but the keypoint is yourself.
Do you face fear with positive attitude? It's a very important issue
for you to ponder.
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作文可以架构严谨,亦可不落俗套,端看笔者喜好的呈现方式...
我不会说自己这篇是在献丑,因为我所受的教育使然,分享诸位闻香一番... :)
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1F：推 Rain2207:很好 勇於分享 good, 有人要一起回应吗? 我觉得很棒 02/28 19:43
2F：推 shiyachan:fearness→fear , I "am" afraid of @@ 02/28 19:58
Thanks for reminding. Originally I suggested that there must be some
diversity between noun and verb of "fear". It seemed that I am too naive
and lack of acquirements. Gotta study! XD
※ 编辑: scream7 来自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:07)
3F：→ shiyachan:bravenesse我觉得改成bravery或courage比较好@@" 02/28 20:00
小的斗胆一提,bravery是大概念性的名词,草民叙述个人小感觉使用小概念名词就够了(?)
举例来说:
jewel 指称宝石首饰
jewelry 总称宝石
何人敢口出狂言夸称自己买了jewelry(所有宝石的总称)? XDXDDDDD
※ 编辑: scream7 来自: 125.228.252.242 (02/28 20:12)
4F：推 layles:请问第二段due to後面可以接一个句子吗? 03/02 13:48
5F：推 layles:请问could have brainstorming是??? 03/02 14:00
6F：推 layles:第二段第一句时式好像很怪......modal好像也没这东西 03/02 14:16
7F：推 layles:另外，第一段第一句的fear(v)的主词可以不是人吗? 03/02 14:34
8F：→ scream7:could表现比can更加委婉客气,用法穿越时空所在多有 :) 03/03 15:51
9F：推 shiyachan:braveness我在英文字典中翻不到~所以今天问了老师~老师 03/03 23:49
10F：→ shiyachan:的意见是说bravery或courage比较好~而至於braveness~老 03/03 23:50
11F：→ shiyachan:师则是猜测是後来才有的~形成方式可能是不知道怎麽改名 03/03 23:50
12F：→ shiyachan:词~就直接加ness~ 03/03 23:51
13F：推 shiyachan:fear我看到的句子都是以人当主词~至於能不能不是人~我 03/03 23:54
14F：→ shiyachan:不清楚@@" 不过due to 的 to 是介系词是可以肯定的:) 03/03 23:55