※ 引述《Danny0828 (danny)》之铭言： : 钓鱼有90%的时间在等待， : 等待可能在烈日、大雨、大风中渡过， : 而另外10%是在与鱼搏斗， : 鱼的天性能够知道岸上有掠食者而躲起来， : 因此，垂钓者必须隐身成为湖畔的一部分。 Ninty percents of your time are waiting after you wrote a shitpost. There would be mocking, teasing and blaming as you wait. You'll take the chance to expect an answer in other ten percents. It's a common sense that people will judge you severely. That is why a shitposter must learn to use Google translator at the first palce. 好久没碰英文了，请大家不吝指教~ --------------------------------------------------------------------- 看到你翻的版本了 哈哈 when people are waiting, it take 90% of fishing time waiting. While the other 10% of fishing time is in the fight with fish. People will possibly bear hot sun, heavey rain or wind when fishing. Since Lake fish can feel if there are predators on the shore, so that they can hide. Fishing people must stealth to become one part of the lake. 个人感觉你太坚持逐字翻译了， 例如people will possibly bear.....，可以转为there would be sun blazing, rain pouring or wind blowing. 甚至不太变换语句顺序，例如Since Lake fish那一句 而且冗字有点多，例如when people are waiting的are可以删掉 中英文是不同的语言，除非有特别要求否则依据语文来稍微调整应该是有必要的~ 然後简单的文法错误也要注意 --

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