作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [求译] 生活作息
时间Sun Mar 25 23:24:04 2012
※ 引述《hankevin (catch a wave~~~ @@)》之铭言:
: 手术前要小心起居饮食,避免感染流行性疾病,如感冒
: 试译:
: It is advised to take a standardized living and healthy diet before
: operations, to avoid suffering from epidemics, such as influenza etc..
: 请问"日常作息"有没有更好的翻译?
: 另外帮我看一下文法有没有需要修改的地方
: 谢谢各位板大帮忙指教!!
个人觉得你太执着於硬翻中文的每一个字。例如『起居饮食』。不如写精确一点。
For example
There are precautions that you must observe before the surgery. To avoid
vomiting during surgery, you must not eat and drink too much
12 hours before the surgery. Furthermore, weakened immune system
increases the chance of after-surgery complications, therefore you
should keep good personal hygiene so as not to get common
infectious diseases.
※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 223.136.154.33 (03/26 07:38)
1F:→ quackegg:good! 03/26 21:04