※ 引述《ByTutu (瓜拉)》之铭言： : 请高手帮忙看一下这三句翻译哪边有不妥的地方 : 或是有更好的翻法? 感激不尽! : 1.网路电话利用网际网路传送语音讯息。它可大幅降低长途电话费用 : 　 : 　Internet phone use internet to transmit voice messages. : It can reduce the cost of long distance call significantly. : (传送讯息该我用transmit 能不能写trancfer呢) An Internet phone uses voice over IP technology to transmit phone calls, allowing a significant reduce in long distance charges. : 2.本文检验在小型萤幕上搜寻的失败成因，并提出改善设计的方法. : This text checked the reason that caused the failures of searching : on small screens,and propose the ways for improving designs. 没有上下文，下面是我随手写的。也许不是你原意也不一定。 This article describes the failure of web searching on small screen devices, and proposes a solution to address the hardware design problem. 我觉得你太执着於「逐字」翻译你的中文稿。例如「ways for improving designs」老实说很不顺。 : 3.我们希望本文所探讨的议题，能激发关於讯息分享的讨论. : We hope the topic which this text discussed can stimulate : discussions about messages sharing. : (2.3题的检验.探讨 不确定该不该用过去式...) The topics described in this article would facilitate further discussion about message sharing. 「我们希望」是赘字。个人意见。不过还是要看上下文。 总而言之，适当的翻译一定要有上下文。 ※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 1.162.51.97 (12/30 00:26)