作者normal28 (normal)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 几个小说里的句子
时间Sun Dec 4 22:36:03 2011
1
Harry slipped out of the room unnoticed by either of them.
觉得好像少了个逗号
Harry slipped out of the room, unnoticed by either of them.
是从
Harry slipped out of the room and is unnoticed by either of them.
变过来的吗
2
Tell us what happend after we left, we haven't heard a thing
since Ron's dad told us the family were safe.
两个句子可以用逗号隔开吗 还是祈使句比较特别?
3
"The Ministry of Magic is undertaking a survey of so-called Muggle-born",
the better to understand how they came to possess magical secrets.
不是很清楚 ,the better to... 的文法结构是?
4
Where no proven wizarding ancestry exists, therefore, the so-called
Muggle-born is likely to have obtained magical power by theft or force.
不是很清楚 Where no proven wizarding ancestry exists,的文法结构是?
5
They would never see Hogwarts, perhaps never see their family again,either.
不用连接词吗?
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1F:→ zofloya:well, please enjoy reading while reading novels 12/04 23:27
2F:→ dunchee:1. 原句子没问题。你删掉了前头部份,所以这会影响判读。 12/05 03:09
3F:→ dunchee:试着不要只看这一部份,看整句,体会看看那样子。类似表达 12/05 03:09
4F:→ dunchee:...比如"He came home tired." 12/05 03:10
5F:→ dunchee:逗号的话,这会有另外的语意。参考: 12/05 03:10
7F:→ dunchee:-> 4 .... 12/05 03:10
8F:→ dunchee:第3句( ... and was ..) 不要过份的去想"变过来",因为 1 12/05 03:11
9F:→ dunchee:的表达方式/句型本来就很基本 12/05 03:11
10F:→ dunchee:2. 这是"对话"---毕竟是纸张文字,无法实际听到,所以如果 12/05 03:12
11F:→ dunchee:放句号,那麽读起来似乎停顿太久,用分号似乎太正式 若改 12/05 03:13
12F:→ dunchee:成 , and we haven't 那麽整体意思又变了 12/05 03:14
13F:→ dunchee:其实这也是学会分辨"不同文体(语体)"的一个很好的练习/实 12/05 03:14
14F:→ dunchee:际例子 (我们中文也有, 比如 "酱子"---摹拟(年轻人/特定 12/05 03:15
15F:→ dunchee:族群的实际说话情况) 12/05 03:16
17F:→ normal28:谢谢dunchee的解说 12/05 10:54
18F:→ normal28:to zofloya: i just feel tired to see a red circle 12/05 10:56
19F:→ normal28:with 'grammatically incorrect' 12/05 10:56