: Having heard from administration of school I graduated that you are expecting : to make some additions to your company in October. At the time about 这第一句，"Having ... October" 怎麽好像只有一半？ For example: Having heard the news, I would like to submit my application. : September, I direct and rough sent my resume by mail, it was so ashamed that : I should be more precise to handle this, such as English CV. But I just want "direct and rough sent" 不知是什麽意思。 假设那家公司名字叫做 PTT Inc. I submitted my resume to PTT to apply for a position in accounting manager last September. I deeply appreciate your quick response despite, due to my careless mistakes, that I didn't enclose my English CV as well as other relevant application materials. : to get this chance tightly result in ignoring some important detail. So I : deeply appreciated when receiving your response. : I had been graduated from school for two months. In the period, I often think : if I won't go toward to engineering region developed, what I can do. 没事不需要用过去完成式。 "engineering region developed"? 往工程领域发展？ I've graduated from the department of electric engineering, National Taiwan Univeristy for two months. While most of my friends graduated from the same class simply took engineer positions in domestic IT companies, I've been thinking about my career goal during this period. Is an R&D engineer really what I want to do for the rest of my life? What else could I do other than being an electric engineer? I was puzzling over those questions and wasn't able to make up my mind in terms of my future. : Actually, I still no idea yet. Fortunate, I know which kind of person I want "Actually..." 这一句没有动词。 : to be, which kind of life I want. I know I want to get it! Because of those Fortunately, I am fully aware of the type of people I want to be and the type of life I want to have. : reason so I am here. From the official website, I found the people always 我不了解为何 "because of the reason so I am here"。此句和前文的逻辑关系？ "official website" 是什麽？哪里的 web site? "I found the people .... problems" 这句也是没头没脑的出现在这。 : seek a way to solve variety problems. I trust they will make me experience : here rewarding, valuable, and fun. : In study period, through the operation of the experiment proved the theory : and the practice were complements each of the other. Besides, comparison The electrical engineering department of NTU offered a unique bachelor program integrating both theorecial and hands-on training. The goal is to prepare its graduates for the unprecedented challenges that today's top engineers will be facing. I was lucky enough to be one of the graduates of the department. : theory and practice trained ability of thinking logically. Further on tried "comparison .... logically" 这句完全看不懂。 : to seek the reason from the failure and bring out more ideas. Experimental "Further on .... ideas" 这句也超怪的。 : experience and attitudes gradually developed, and then the skills of emerging : and solving problems were chastened in the still. Moreover, I had engaged in "Experimental ... in the still" 保留一贯令人看不懂的风格。 : the “XIN-GUANG plan” and interacted with students from different : department. The plan fostered my willpower and courage to rough the "Moreover" 之後这句，和前面几句到底有没有关系？没有的话，我不了解为何要 用 moreover? : difficulties and through the other activities, I learned the spirit of "rough the difficulties"？ : teamwork, the skills of effectively communication and cooperation with other : people. : I constantly encourage myself to be the person who has independent spirit, : open-mindedness and positive attitude. I’d like to contribute myself to the : future job and anticipate myself to do the job efficient and excellent. I’ll I always think of myself as an independent, open-minded and optimistic person. With my competency in electrical engineering and the positive working attitude, I believe I can make enormous contribution to PTT Inc. : do my best and keep improving myself. : I would be very happy to work under the surrounding if it is possible. Thank "under the surrounding" 本来是想说什麽？ : you in advance for your consideration and courtesy 有些人非常反对 "thank in advance" 这种话。据说西方人完全不理解这种逻辑。看 你买不买帐。 ※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 114.24.2.94 (10/09 19:25) ※ 编辑: hoch 来自: 114.24.2.94 (10/09 19:29)