作者balajaing (微笑，深呼吸)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 请帮我看英文履历
时间Sun Oct 9 09:57:48 2011
我想请大家帮我看一下我自己所打英文履历，主要针对Cover letter那部份
内文很长，先谢谢大家有耐心的看完
主要想看用字跟文法上有无错误之问题
谢谢大家～
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Having heard from administration of school I graduated that you are expecting
to make some additions to your company in October. At the time about
September, I direct and rough sent my resume by mail, it was so ashamed that
I should be more precise to handle this, such as English CV. But I just want
to get this chance tightly result in ignoring some important detail. So I
deeply appreciated when receiving your response.
I had been graduated from school for two months. In the period, I often think
if I won't go toward to engineering region developed, what I can do.
Actually, I still no idea yet. Fortunate, I know which kind of person I want
to be, which kind of life I want. I know I want to get it! Because of those
reason so I am here. From the official website, I found the people always
seek a way to solve variety problems. I trust they will make me experience
here rewarding, valuable, and fun.
In study period, through the operation of the experiment proved the theory
and the practice were complements each of the other. Besides, comparison
theory and practice trained ability of thinking logically. Further on tried
to seek the reason from the failure and bring out more ideas. Experimental
experience and attitudes gradually developed, and then the skills of emerging
and solving problems were chastened in the still. Moreover, I had engaged in
the “XIN-GUANG plan” and interacted with students from different
department. The plan fostered my willpower and courage to rough the
difficulties and through the other activities, I learned the spirit of
teamwork, the skills of effectively communication and cooperation with other
people.
I constantly encourage myself to be the person who has independent spirit,
open-mindedness and positive attitude. I’d like to contribute myself to the
future job and anticipate myself to do the job efficient and excellent. I’ll
do my best and keep improving myself.
I would be very happy to work under the surrounding if it is possible. Thank
you in advance for your consideration and courtesy
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谢谢
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1F：推 Bigfatty73:废话蛮多的, 要修剪一下 10/09 15:18
2F：→ Bigfatty73:第一段我建议全删 10/09 15:18
3F：→ Bigfatty73:不要讲你什麽都不会 规划空白 要干嘛不知道 10/09 15:19
4F：→ Bigfatty73:讲你经历什麽对工作职位有用, 什麽能力公司用得上你 10/09 15:20
5F：→ Bigfatty73:为什麽你决定选他们, 跟他们之後有什麽打算 10/09 15:20
6F：→ Bigfatty73:有什麽期望或是对公司有什麽要求 10/09 15:22
7F：→ Bigfatty73:cover letter要精要不要聊天 10/09 15:23
8F：→ dunchee:这不是"Cover letter"的格式，也远超出范围 建议你买本写 10/09 21:29
9F：→ dunchee:英文履历(含cover letter)的书，几百块(台币)的投资，和你 10/09 21:29
10F：→ dunchee:日後收入比起来很划算的 10/09 21:29
11F：→ balajaing:嗯，第一段我有打算直接放在mail上，给跟我联络面试的人 10/10 00:21
12F：→ balajaing:想要谢谢她之类的，大概就只有第一句那附近左右会放在 10/10 00:22
13F：→ balajaing:cover letter上。应该说，是我表达的不够好，在第三段那 10/10 00:24
14F：→ balajaing:我说明的我求学中所获得的东西，以及在下一段中的个性、 10/10 00:25
15F：→ balajaing:态度。我会试着以更好的方式去表达出重点。 10/10 00:26
16F：→ balajaing:我在猜你说的格式是指在一开始那边的姓名、住址、公司名 10/10 00:29
17F：→ balajaing:称、称谓那些东西吗？还是各段表达的重点？其实我有点模 10/10 00:30
18F：→ balajaing:糊。不过我会去买书，我相信他们有一定的用处。 10/10 00:31
19F：→ balajaing:真的谢谢你们 10/10 00:32