作者alen12098 (斗瑜)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 关於一句句子写法的问题(not only...but also)
时间Sun Jul 24 23:58:03 2011
最近在写英文自传
请我一位朋友改过後.有一句话他改成
"I enhanced not only the ability in computer programming but also in CAD
software operation, and ..."
但我觉得 the ability应该放在not only前面.变成
"I enhanced the ability not only in computer programming but also in CAD
software operation, and ..."
但我那位朋友说不对.但又跟我直觉矛盾@@
因此想上来请教一下
感谢!!
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1F：推 hkcynic:你的朋友正确 07/25 00:09
※ 编辑: alen12098 来自: 42.72.156.38 (07/25 00:15)
2F：→ alen12098:抱歉 刚刚第一句有打错 恳请问楼上 这样还是第一句对吗 07/25 00:17
3F：推 gloriosa:我觉得你是对的 只是有点怪啦 因为not only the...是习惯 07/25 09:10
4F：→ gloriosa:用法 所以我可能会说enhanced not only the ability in 07/25 09:11
5F：→ gloriosa:programming but also the one in CAD 07/25 09:11
6F：→ hoch:老实说我觉得不管怎样改，在这个句子里，not only..but also 07/25 10:29
7F：→ hoch:感觉都很多余。个人意见。 07/25 10:30
8F：→ hoch:Having been working at IBM for three years, I've received 07/25 10:30
9F：→ hoch:great training in computer programming and CAD software. 07/25 10:30
本来两个东西是用AND连接 但是後面又以and连接一个句子
所以才想 用其他方式表达
感谢各位意见!
※ 编辑: alen12098 来自: 111.81.75.104 (07/25 19:09)