作者sasa8 (sasa)
看板Eng-Class
标题[求译] 我这句翻的对吗?
时间Wed May 18 15:34:35 2011
I want to provide a place where people who love cats; however, they can come
here and have fun with cats.
我是要说
我想提供一个爱猫的人可以来的地方并可以得到快乐
where people who love cats 後面是不是要加甚麽?
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1F：→ kerorolover:你这样翻很奇怪，试着连成一句话 05/18 16:18
2F：推 noruas:把; however, they can 这几个字(含标点)删掉就好 05/18 16:49
3F：→ noruas:爱猫的人 cat-loving people 05/18 16:50
4F：→ noruas:得到快乐 enjoy their time with cats 05/18 16:51
5F：→ noruas:或 have a good time/ have fun 也可以 05/18 16:52
6F：→ heziying:cat lovers可能听起来比较可爱一点 给你参考看 :P 05/18 17:05
7F：→ heziying:people who love cats也可以 n大在这里我觉得cat-loving 05/18 17:06
8F：→ heziying:people可能听起来有点太正式了? 我个人的感觉 05/18 17:07
9F：→ heziying:I want to provide a place that cat lovers can come to 05/18 17:09
10F：→ heziying:and have fun with cats! 你觉得如何? 05/18 17:09
11F：推 sellgd:a place where (关代副词)，that 记得不能这样用 05/19 21:10
12F：→ sellgd:要用关代名词也至少是 a place in which 05/19 21:11
13F：→ sellgd:H大你的句子，若没有and have後面到尾的话即可，但事实不然 05/19 21:12
14F：→ sellgd:因为and前後的词性结构不一 05/19 21:12
15F：→ heziying:a place that X can come to & (then) have fun没啥问题 05/21 11:45
16F：→ heziying:a place in which会在这样的情况听起来有点太小心不自然 05/21 11:48