作者clarol (不抱期待的惊喜)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] 有关国中英文短文的问题
时间Sat Dec 11 06:44:43 2010
以下为我自己参考杂志及课本改编成的国中英文课文,
要用来在课堂上试教国中英文(约190字,35分钟内),但深怕自己的单字和文法有误
烦请大家来帮我看看有没有问题的地方需要改正~~先谢谢您的帮忙喔:)
Snoopy's Big Day
Everyone's favorite cartoon dog has a birthday on October 2nd.
What makes this year so special is Snoopy's 60th anniversary!
Let's see and learn more about Peanuts' friends.
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Snoopy made his first appearance in the Peanuts comic strip in 1950. Snoopy
displays his personality by sleeping on top of his doghouse. While he is
awake, he acts out imaginary roles to be human. For example, Snoopy imagines
himself to be a great writer but in fact his writing is terrible. Snoopy's
master is Charlie Brown. This clumsy and round-headed boy usually looks like
a fool. In football season, the black-haired girl Lucy plays the same tricks
on him. Every year Charlie Brown lets her do it. When he failed, he never gave
up the possibility of success and tried again. The third figure, Lucy, is
bad-tempered and selfish. Lucy has no problem pointing out the mistakes of
others, but she can't find out her own ones. She is in love with Schroeder,
the kid musician. He likes to play his toy piano. Finally, other Snoopy's
friend like Lucy's brother Linus holds onto his "security blanket."
Peppermint Patty always nods off in class and gets a D on every test.
Thus, their charming personalities teach us not to take care of human life
too seriously.
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※ 编辑: clarol 来自: 111.252.1.232 (12/11 06:46)
1F:→ clarol:另外想请问Schroeder的Sch是发[k]?驽钝的我请大家帮忙><" 12/11 06:47
2F:→ hoch:Schroeder应该发 "sheep" 的 "sh" 的音吧。我猜。另外最後一 12/11 08:09
3F:→ hoch:句好像意思有点怪。 12/11 08:09
6F:→ dunchee:[0:20] 12/11 08:26
7F:→ clarol:感谢d大!!好像跟h大讲的一样,发sh音?另外,我承认最後一句 12/11 08:52
8F:→ clarol:有点硬凑上去QQ 好像不加一句漫画的优点无法说服为何有名 12/11 08:53
9F:→ clarol:也请大家尽量发表前面有没有用字或是文法问题喔 谢谢:) 12/11 08:55
10F:→ tengharold:我听d大的连结也是听到sh音呀 12/11 08:59
11F:→ flyings:Sch应该发sh的音,就如同德总理施若德的施 12/12 00:12