作者hoch (Sanctuary)
看板Eng-Class
标题Re: [文法] resume...可以请高手帮我看一下文法吗
时间Mon Nov 1 09:16:00 2010
: Career Objective：
: Control process qualities and
: improve equipment capacity and enhance the manufacturing process
我不是你专业领域的。不过 "control process qualities" 和 "equipment
capacity" 听起来很怪。最好确定一下这些是正确的写法。
: Experience：
: Nan Shan Life Insurance, Taipei, Taiwan
: Insurance consultant, June 2008 - January 2009
: ◎ Insurance marketing and after-sales service
: ◎ Analyze and plan asset allocations for clients
: COME BUY beverage store, Taipei, Taiwan
: Part-time worker, June 2006 - June 2007
: ◎ Mix beverages and clean environments
: ◎ Train staves
staff?
: Tzu Yu Educational Organization, Taipei, Taiwan
: Family teacher, April 2006 - May 2007
teacher for after-school tuition class
: ◎ According to the company's textbooks to teach students and add
: related knowledge
不建议用 "according to"。也许可以这样：giving lessons to students
using the company's own teaching materials
: ◎ Help students to solve homework problems
: Ch'ien K'un Industry, Ilan, Taiwan
: Temporary worker, August 1997 - May 2008
staff
: ◎Carry steel and fix structure
: Education：
: Fu Jen University Grad - Feb 2007
: Bachelor of Arts in Chemistry
化学系毕业是 Bachelor of Arts？不是 Bachelor of Science? 我以为理学士
是後者。
: Skills：
: Languages: Fluent in Chinese, Taiwanese
Mandarin and Taiwanese
: Computers: Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint
: Interests: Stock, Guitar, Bass, Table tennis, Pop music
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: 另外，我想请问在上面几行的Skills中，
: 如果英文普普不强，该怎写。
诚心建议，如果要写 "普普不强"，不如就不要写了。
适度膨风一下我倒是觉得是可以接受的。反正每个人都这样做，老板也不太会
当真。
: 日文只会 "大家的日本语初一"，要写略懂吗。
什麽叫做 "大家的日本语初一"?
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