作者sj1128 (haha)
站内Eng-Class
标题[求译] 伺服器更新
时间Sun Sep 12 13:46:53 2010
求英译：
为了安全审核,5台伺服器将於星期一晚上7时後
更新到windows server 2003 service pack 2.
我的试译：（求译「段落」者，本栏请勿留白）
1. For security audit, 5 servers will update
service pack 2 for windows 2003 server in monday after 7:00PM.
2. For security audit, 5 servers will update to
windows 2003 server service pack 2 in monday after 7:00PM.
3. For security audit, 5 servers will be updated
service pack 2 for windows 2003 server in monday after 7:00PM.
请问
update有需要用被动吗?
用1的sp2 for windows 2003 server 还是2的to win 2003 sp2 较好?
那一个较好或有其他较好译法 谢谢
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