※ 引述《imbhan (逼逼)》之铭言： : EDUCATION : 09/2006~06/2010 FU JEN CATHOLIC UNIVERSITY,，Taipei，Taiwan ^^ ^^英文不用全形标点符号 : Major in business administration 一般都会写出学位名称，而不仅写主修 B.A., Business Administration : 09/2000~06/2006 Sacred Hearts High School，Douliou，Yunlin : EXPERIENCE : 07/2009~05/2010 Election Study Center，National Chengchi University : Phone interviewer : ●Investigated Taiwan's electoral system and the election behavior（调查台湾选 ^^^^^^^^^^^^ 没有the : 举制度和选举行为） 光看字会以为你是调查局的 XD Researched Taiwan's ... : ● Understood the populace's idea in Taiwan by telephone 利用电话访问台湾各 : 地民众的想法 Performed telephone interviews to understand... : 04/2007~08/2007 WATAMI TAIWAN CO., LTD(Japanese Casual Restaurant) ^^加空格 : Part-time employee : ●Worked 20 hours per week : ●Served the customers and maintained the clean of the restaurant restaurant hygiene : ●Trained on and used excellent customer service practices in fast paced，work : environment. : EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES : 09/2004~06/2005 Leader;，Volleyball Team of Association : 09/2005~05/2006 Marketing Planner，Service Club(企划组成员) : 09/2007~06/2008 Marketing Planner，FJU-Chiayun : COMPUTER/LANGUAGE SKILLS : ●MS Word、MS Excel、MS Powerpoint、Adobe、Outlook ^^^^^Adobe甚麽? Photoshop? Acrobat? MS Word, excel... 可简称为 MS Office Suite : ●Windows operating system : ●Fluent in English，Excellent in Taiwanese ^^^^^^ 真的吗? Fluent只比native低一级耶 : HONORS : 2010 Champion，Graduation thesis(毕业专题第一名) 1st place in graduation thesis competition (我也不确定有无此说法) : 好像有点乱耶 不好意思 因为还在打草稿 加油 : 想请问大家我的文法或单字的错误在哪呢 : 前面还有基本的个人资料 : 想请问这样的履历会不会太少了阿 : 还可以再加些什麽呢 履历太过简单，平凡无奇，可以写得更漂亮一点 "performed telephone interviews..." 可改为 "interviewed 3,000+ telephone respondents on..." (自己大概民调过几个人写进去) "worked 20 hours per week" 可改为 "maintained 20 hour/wk workload concurrent with course and extracurricular requirements" "served the customers" 可改成 "personally responsible for the service of 15 tables" (自己负责几桌就写几桌) : 不好意思谢谢大家!! : 还想请问一下 : QUALIFICATION重点是要写些什麽阿 人家qualification是要甚麽我也不知道，可能是与工作相关之学经历证照吧~ : 不好意思!!! 抛砖引玉 -- Wise men talk because they have something to say; fools, because they have to say something. -Plato (427BC-347BC) Plato is boring. -Frederich Nietzsche (1844-1900) Nietzsche was stupid and abnormal. -Leo Tolstoy (1828-1910) --

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