作者dream1314 (我是香蕉姐姐)
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標題[問題] 可以幫我看哪裡怪怪的嗎?
時間Thu Nov 15 21:56:11 2007
簡單的色調 行走於自然主義 低調的奢華 生活簡單卻也精采 似花一般 靜靜的 綻放
simple tone, walk along naturalism , understated luxury, live is simply also actually brilliant, as flowers effloresce still
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可以幫我修一下嗎?
3Q
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1F：→ humblesam:simple colour tone that goes along with the essence 11/16 01:37
2F：→ humblesam:of naturalism. embedded luxury. lives simply, but 11/16 01:38
3F：→ humblesam:also brilliantly. blossomed peacefully like flowers. 11/16 01:44
4F：→ humblesam:標點符號怪怪的~ 11/16 01:49
5F：推 Kirk:寫中文很容易沒有主詞 流於鋪陳敘述 要翻就會變了味道 11/16 03:33