作者adolinao (小柔)
看板teaching
標題[請益] 高中聯考英文作文 句子
時間Tue Jan 8 17:17:10 2013
I suggest that you go on a trip with your family
to relieve pressure and fatigue,
for every time when I meet you ,
you always feel tired and there is often a deeply black round
around your eyes.
朋友請我替她中女的小孩看一下英文作文
想請問板上高手 她一句裡面放這麼多子句好嗎?
最後面那樣表達好嗎?
拜託大家不吝指教，感謝您!!!
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1F：→ ely6231:when去掉。 最後一句是要表達黑眼圈? there are often 01/08 19:00
2F：→ ely6231:dark circles around your eyes. 參考看看 01/08 19:00
3F：→ ely6231:另外建議沒有特別原因的話 for用because即可 01/08 19:04
4F：→ adolinao:感謝您!^___^ 01/15 21:12