作者adolinao (小柔)
看板teaching
标题[请益] 高中联考英文作文 句子
时间Tue Jan 8 17:17:10 2013
I suggest that you go on a trip with your family
to relieve pressure and fatigue,
for every time when I meet you ,
you always feel tired and there is often a deeply black round
around your eyes.
朋友请我替她中女的小孩看一下英文作文
想请问板上高手 她一句里面放这麽多子句好吗?
最後面那样表达好吗?
拜托大家不吝指教，感谢您!!!
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1F：→ ely6231:when去掉。 最後一句是要表达黑眼圈? there are often 01/08 19:00
2F：→ ely6231:dark circles around your eyes. 参考看看 01/08 19:00
3F：→ ely6231:另外建议没有特别原因的话 for用because即可 01/08 19:04
4F：→ adolinao:感谢您!^___^ 01/15 21:12