作者julieandme (futur~)
看板studyabroad
標題[問題] 錄取多間後放棄信怎麼寫?
時間Tue Mar 15 09:46:42 2011
不好意思各位版大
想請問各位錄取一間以上必須要放棄一些學校的offer時，會不會寫信去通知學校?
如果要寫的話，通常都怎麼寫呢?
以下是我目前擬出的草稿...
希望好心人可以幫我看一下，這樣寫可不可以，會不會很無禮之類的~
感謝...
Dear admission officers,
It was my great pleasure to be admitted by xxx(school's name).
xxx(school's name) is a comprehensible and prime institute and
always receives great reputation. However, since I was admitted by
several schools this year, it became a hard decision for me to decide a
definitive one. To my regret that I am not able to attend xxx(school's name),
mainly because of the unaffordable tuition. I had long coveted the chance to
work with your outstanding students and faculty. It is my great loss to
decline your offer.
Best regard,
xxx(my name)
以上~
請好心人幫我看一下了!!!謝謝!!!
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◆ From: 140.112.217.108
1F：推 Sulstan:institution, faculty is an uncountable noun! 03/15 09:50
※ 編輯: julieandme 來自: 140.112.217.108 (03/15 09:55)
2F：→ julieandme:感謝s大~faculty的部分已改正!institute的部分好像都可 03/15 09:55
3F：→ julieandme:可以!? 03/15 09:56
4F：推 f54512:個人建議 第一句話就表明自己沒辦法去該學校 03/15 10:50
5F：→ f54512:我之前也是和你寫差不多的內容 結果對方很可能只看了第一句 03/15 10:51
6F：→ f54512:就以為我要去 害我趕快再寄信 跟他們解釋 Orz 03/15 10:51
7F：推 meijer:不用回吧 03/15 10:58
8F：推 twowugs:能愈快通知學校你不去愈好，這樣備取的人才能被通知，學校 03/15 11:22
9F：→ twowugs:也能調整admission plans 03/15 11:22
10F：推 Sulstan:小弟才疏淺學，受教了! 03/15 11:55
11F：推 ron0908:短一點比較好 太長囉~ 03/15 12:19
12F：推 bnn:同意f54512 第一句話使用負面詞(sorry, unfortunately)等表明 03/15 14:00
13F：→ julieandme:!!謝謝大家的建議!!! 03/15 15:20