作者julieandme (futur~)
看板studyabroad
标题[问题] 录取多间後放弃信怎麽写?
时间Tue Mar 15 09:46:42 2011
不好意思各位版大
想请问各位录取一间以上必须要放弃一些学校的offer时，会不会写信去通知学校?
如果要写的话，通常都怎麽写呢?
以下是我目前拟出的草稿...
希望好心人可以帮我看一下，这样写可不可以，会不会很无礼之类的~
感谢...
Dear admission officers,
It was my great pleasure to be admitted by xxx(school's name).
xxx(school's name) is a comprehensible and prime institute and
always receives great reputation. However, since I was admitted by
several schools this year, it became a hard decision for me to decide a
definitive one. To my regret that I am not able to attend xxx(school's name),
mainly because of the unaffordable tuition. I had long coveted the chance to
work with your outstanding students and faculty. It is my great loss to
decline your offer.
Best regard,
xxx(my name)
以上~
请好心人帮我看一下了!!!谢谢!!!
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◆ From: 140.112.217.108
1F：推 Sulstan:institution, faculty is an uncountable noun! 03/15 09:50
※ 编辑: julieandme 来自: 140.112.217.108 (03/15 09:55)
2F：→ julieandme:感谢s大~faculty的部分已改正!institute的部分好像都可 03/15 09:55
3F：→ julieandme:可以!? 03/15 09:56
4F：推 f54512:个人建议 第一句话就表明自己没办法去该学校 03/15 10:50
5F：→ f54512:我之前也是和你写差不多的内容 结果对方很可能只看了第一句 03/15 10:51
6F：→ f54512:就以为我要去 害我赶快再寄信 跟他们解释 Orz 03/15 10:51
7F：推 meijer:不用回吧 03/15 10:58
8F：推 twowugs:能愈快通知学校你不去愈好，这样备取的人才能被通知，学校 03/15 11:22
9F：→ twowugs:也能调整admission plans 03/15 11:22
10F：推 Sulstan:小弟才疏浅学，受教了! 03/15 11:55
11F：推 ron0908:短一点比较好 太长罗~ 03/15 12:19
12F：推 bnn:同意f54512 第一句话使用负面词(sorry, unfortunately)等表明 03/15 14:00
13F：→ julieandme:!!谢谢大家的建议!!! 03/15 15:20